Safe Word...

I ordered the sequel to 'Carrie's Story' from Amazon the other day (called 'Safe Word') and it arrived last night. I am going to put it to the top of the reading pile and will review it in he next week or so...

By Invitation....

My story 'By Invitation' is now available as a free download on Femdom Cave, along with many others it seems. So if you want some free fiction, I suggest you click here

Isn't it funny...

I was just on Amazon checking out the price for the follow up to that book I've just reviewed (it only has one review on there by the way and it's not a good one!) when I noticed the old Black Lace classic 'Cassandra's Conflict'. I never read many Black Lace books, but I read that one a couple of times back in the 90's, and funnily enough there's only one scene that I really remember.
I can't remember all the details but Cassandra watches a male slave being teased by another woman. He is laid on his back and the woman holds his cock lightly and the slave has to lift his hips repeatedly to 'fuck' her hand. Every time he gets close to cumming the woman lets go and he has to start all over again, which is both immensely frustrating and exhausting. Isn't it funny how that is the only bit of the whole book that I can really remember, and I recall even back then thinking that sounded soooooooooo hot!

Hope you guys are enjoying the new captions...

I'm not feeling very inspired to write much today... nothing's grabbing me. Nice to see we have three new followers (welcome!) although I noticed I lost one earlier in the week, can't please everyone I guess! So I'm pretty much just making captions, because I know a lot of you love them.
I do like the simplicity of captions, so much easier than writing stories, and sometimes just as effective. I wonder if one day someone will publish a book of internet femdom/chastity captions like the 'I Can Haz Cheeseburger' books? There's certainly more than enough of them out there... I guess there'll be a lot of copyright problems with that, but still, perhaps some rogue publishing company will have a go.
I'd love to see 'I Can Haz Femdom Bitchez' on Amazon, that would be most amusing.
Hmm...

More writing...

Managed to add a couple of thousand words to my Femdom Cave book last night. Seemed like hard work, I guess ignoring it for two weeks isn't the way to keep the juices flowing. Still I'm over 21,000 words now and I'm sure I could make that a few more if I actually went back and filled in some of the finer details (which I'm not going to do until I've finished the first draft).
In my eagerness to include an earlier than planned cuckolding scene I've gone somewhat off my original plan, and to be honest I'd only planned so far into the book anyway, partly because I knew I'd never stick to it...
Hmm, and I still have to write the difficult scene that I put off writing before, only now it's from a different angle, which might make it a little easier, we'll see... maybe I can get some writing done this evening, after my appointment with Mistress Motivator!
Mmmm, Mistress R in lycra. Much more fun than walking, even with an iPod.

6th of June...

That's the last time I wrote any of my book. How can that be possible! Dammit, I was supposed to get so much done this week and it just hasn't happened. Mind you, in a way it's good because over the last fortnight I've come up with a nice little twist and stepped off the previously fairly linear story line a little. I've run my idea by Mistress R and she thinks it's a good next move as it presents an opportunity for an additional cuckolding scene.
Mistress R also commented to me the other day that she thinks I should try writing a normal book as she thinks I could easily write a better chic-lit book than Matt Dunn... and there's probably some actual money in it, hahaha!

Just received my latest book...

After reading about it on Mistress 160's website, I decided to order it and see if it really was as good as they claimed. I shall let you know in due course... in the meantime check out what she said about it here

BOOK REVIEW: The Dominatrix by Emma Allen

As someone who frets endlessly about making his stories believable, it's slightly annoying that Emma Allen's book 'The Dominatrix' falls into the usual trap of feeling 'convenient'. I don't want to spoil it for anyone so I can't really explain what I mean, but take it from me over the last couple of days I've been rolling my eyes a lot. Which is a shame, because for the most part this is a well written story that's definitely a cut above some of the guff I've read lately (Roy Gordon's 'Lust Call' springs to mind). The sex scenes are well written, albeit the whole secret door to a dungeon room thing makes me cringe a little bit. There's also one scene which, after making me roll my eyes, then made me wonder if the writer had realised what she'd written as the heroine 'Mistress Karen' goes from deep anal (without lube!) to deep throat in the space of seconds (hardly dominant woman behaviour I should have thought!), something which stands out from the page like a sore thumb given the otherwise fairly unremarkable nature of the sex scenes before it.
It's also quite a short book which to me feels like it could have done with a bit of fleshing out, and like I said, everything falls into place oh-so-conveniently, right from the very first page. But maybe that's how you are supposed to write a sex-novel, after all it's not going to be up for a Booker Prize is it? I just prefer a story that dots the i's and crosses the t's and explains things properly without relying too much on happy coincidences. All that said, if you're looking for a shortish sex novel with a Femdom theme, you could do a lot worse.

The Dominatrix is published by X Libris / Little Brown